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Queen Of Cats

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So Super pleased with how this turned out!

I found an old duotang with drawings in it from WAY BACK WHEN and decided to redraw one of the characters.

So this would be Kaleigh, and she is the queen of cats. =)

I drew this one without a reference, but the pose felt really familiar and I'm not sure if I've seen it somewhere before?
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2160x2654px 4.76 MB
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a nice piece. The pose really takes advantage of space for a good composition, and you have an attractive style. I feels there are a handful of technique issue here, and overcoming them will help your good art rise to the level of excellence.

Although the pose is very solid; the gesture and expression don't tell us anything about the subject.

There are a few anatomy issues: the length of the left arm, the size difference between the legs, and the way the subject's wrists bend.

Your colors are good, but the shading feels unfocused with light hitting the subjects from differing places. A bit more contrast will also help.

I really dig the flow of the sharp, bright lining in the hair, but elsewhere in the picture it looks unclean and squiggly. I think these sharp highlights give your style a unique and bold feeling, so it's a good idea to give all of the line work the same level of attention you did in the hair.

Once again, this is pretty good. Keep up the good work.